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up in the garden of eden

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we getting high up in the garden of eden :)
Image size
1448x972px 1.77 MB
Make
NIKON CORPORATION
Model
NIKON D3000
Shutter Speed
1/50 second
Aperture
F/5.3
Focal Length
45 mm
ISO Speed
200
Date Taken
Jun 16, 2011, 9:41:48 AM
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:star::star::star-half::star-empty::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star-half::star-empty::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star-empty::star-empty::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Impact

Hi buddy. I like the picture a lot. My ideas would be to keep the pic more focused on one thing. Like the flower in the middle . what i see happening is that it is too busy. too much to look at. make one or the other your subject not both. Hope this helps. I think you have a great eye and will be a very accomplished photographer. Simple is always better than busy. Dont give the viewer too much to focus on. This distracts from the main purpose of the photo. I would also like to see some more people shots from you. You seem to have a flair for them.